Monday, November 30, 2009

Personal Essay

This week for your response homework, I would like for you to post your thesis statement and the three body paragraph topic sentences. Please make sure they are labeled so that readers of your post clearly understand which is which. Also, include any struggles or difficulties you're having so that readers can comment back to you with suggestions to help you.

This week for your comment homework, I would like you to offer suggestions to the person that you're commenting back to that will improve their work. This might be revisions or edits to their thesis and/or topic sentences, or maybe your suggestions address the problems the person said she/he is having. Or both.